Editing Practical Feedback

 Teacher's feedback:

WWW:

  • Good planning
  • Folly sounds
  • Shot/reverse shot
  • Effects
  • Dissolve
  • Backward tracking
  • Title
  • Well constructed narrative


EBI:

  • Abrupt ending
  • Continuity shot
  • More match-on-action

Student feedback:

WWW:
  • Great performance
  • Backward tracking shot
  • use of props
  • engaging narrative
  • multiple effects 
  • Great editing
  • Sound effects
EBI:

  • More match-on-action
  • Better ending

Strengths: I believe that I was successful in meeting the brief, and the narrative was quite engaging. Furthermore, the filming of the actors that I did included many techniques.
Weakness: I could include more match-on-action throughout the scene.

In this task, I was given a brief from which I, alongside my team, effectively created a narrative to meet the criteria eg: Match on action, shot/reverse shot, and 180 degree shot. This was complemented by sound effects and transitions that I included in my independent editing.

In order to improve, next time I will use these shots (match on action) throughout the scene instead of attempting them once. Additionally, I will ensure that my ending has a smooth end to the scene to finish the video clean.

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