Editing Practical Feedback
Teacher's feedback: WWW: Good planning Folly sounds Shot/reverse shot Effects Dissolve Backward tracking Title Well constructed narrative EBI: Abrupt ending Continuity shot More match-on-action Student feedback: WWW: Great performance Backward tracking shot use of props engaging narrative multiple effects Great editing Sound effects EBI: More match-on-action Better ending Strengths: I believe that I was successful in meeting the brief, and the narrative was quite engaging. Furthermore, the filming of the actors that I did included many techniques. Weakness: I could include more match-on-action throughout the scene. In this task, I was given a brief from which I, alongside my team, effectively created a narrative to meet the criteria eg: Match on action, shot/reverse shot, and 180 degree shot. This was complemented by sound effects and transitions that I included in my independent editing. In order to improve, next time I will use these shots (match on action) throughout the ...