Tiktok vid 2 LR and next steps

 FEEDBACK

WWW:

Sound effect

Good questions

Setting- studio

Lighting

Good opening shot

On screen typography

Set-up shot


EBI:

Audio in background

Soundtrack

Structure


PEER FEEDBACK:

Great concept with multiple shots and angles. Great use of studio setup and lighting as well script and "rapid fire questions"



NEXTSTEP:

Make the next video which will b a trnsition video with three different locations and outfits/ looks.

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